Comments on: Sexy Snippet #2 http://secretaphrodisiac.wordpress.com/2008/06/12/sexy-snippet-2/ If it turns you on, let me know! Fri, 13 Jun 2008 12:31:49 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: redbud http://secretaphrodisiac.wordpress.com/2008/06/12/sexy-snippet-2/#comment-13 redbud Fri, 13 Jun 2008 12:31:49 +0000 http://secretaphrodisiac.wordpress.com/?p=12#comment-13 Another bon-bon before the day begins. This is your best one yet, especially the unexpected ending. I, personally, would not have been able to muster the self-discipline of your man. One wicked typo: "her pulled out". "She felt her self impaled..." sounded a little awkward to me? Who is she going to feel *but* herself? Nice details with the lock of hair and the taste of sweat. Can't wait to see what comes next. Your loyal reader, Red Another bon-bon before the day begins. This is your best one yet, especially the unexpected ending. I, personally, would not have been able to muster the self-discipline of your man.

One wicked typo: “her pulled out”. “She felt her self impaled…” sounded a little awkward to me? Who is she going to feel *but* herself?

Nice details with the lock of hair and the taste of sweat. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

Your loyal reader,

Red

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