Comments for The Secret Aphrodisiac

Comment on Sexy Snippet #2 by redbud

redbud — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 12:31:49 +0000

Another bon-bon before the day begins. This is your best one yet, especially the unexpected ending. I, personally, would not have been able to muster the self-discipline of your man.

One wicked typo: “her pulled out”. “She felt her self impaled…” sounded a little awkward to me? Who is she going to feel *but* herself?

Nice details with the lock of hair and the taste of sweat. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

Your loyal reader,

Red

Comment on Sexy Snippet #1 by thesecretaphrodisiac

thesecretaphrodisiac — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 13:45:43 +0000

Thanks red.

I couldn’t think of another phrase other than rock hard. Selective erection writers block

hehe.

Comment on Sexy Snippet #1 by redbud

redbud — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 12:08:18 +0000

Love it. I’ll be thinking about this little hors d’oeuvre when I go to work today.

(Watch out for cliches like “rock hard”.)

And I love the phrase: “a horny taster”. If you don’t mind, I think I’ll reciprocate with a taster of my own. In the meantime, off to work I go, rock hard.

Comment on Brief Encounters (Mature Content) by redbud

redbud — Wed, 11 Jun 2008 02:30:59 +0000

I like the changes you made, especially as regards making her seem less like a fantasy object and more like a person.

I wonder where this erotic story would go if, at the end of the night, she couldn’t afford a cab and needed a ride home?

Looking forward to your next story.

Comment on Brief Encounters (Mature Content) by thesecretaphrodisiac

thesecretaphrodisiac — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 11:43:43 +0000

Hmm, fair point Redbud – I will go back and have a look as soon as I get a chance, do a bit of editing and come back to you. Thanks!

Comment on Why this exists (Adult Content) by thesecretaphrodisiac

thesecretaphrodisiac — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 11:42:33 +0000

Thank you Redbud, that means a lot. I’m a bit busy at the moment (hence so few stories!) but I hope to post more and get a chance to look at yours soon.

Comment on Brief Encounters (Mature Content) by Redbud

Redbud — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 22:06:19 +0000

Just read your story. Good fantasy.

The only thing I missed was a sense of personality, yours and woman’s – little quirks of behavior that let us know she’s a human being. Beyond lust, I never got a sense for what she was thinking or who she was. The psychology of sex is what I enjoy – that, to me, is what turns a story into ‘erotica’.

By the way, I’ve fantasized about meetings like these. Quick & without consequence. In reality, I think I’d be a nervous wreck – but that wouldn’t stop me from trying.

Comment on Why this exists (Adult Content) by Redbud

Redbud — Fri, 06 Jun 2008 21:52:01 +0000

Welcome to blogging. I’ve done the same thing. In fact, I’ve added your site to my blog roll – which isn’t saying much since we’re both in the same boat.

Anyway, I look forward to reading some of your stories. Look for some comments. Can’t promise when, but I will.